The planning of this project was very carefully considered from start to finish. You struggled with direction at first but once you gained confidence in your idea you were off! All your planning is excellent and you have very carefully considered the key concepts.
I would like you to print out your proposal and your target audience entries so I can go over a couple of points with you - important to address now because they will feature in your evaluation and your exam question. with these addressed you can bank full points for planning.
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