I and the whole of the RAFTAS audience loved your film, the simple concept, the camera work and the editing. You have demonstrated excellence in your skills and the use and combination of technical elements. Well done.
The start is a little slow and perhaps a re-shoot now that you've completed the rest would fit better?
Excellent, great idea. Really gets the message across and very striking.
Good idea but poor quality. Needs to be redone with perhaps more emphasis on the 'jump' sounds at ceratin points. Needs more strength in your voice.